My first attempt at drawing

[Ritsuka]

I drew a few pictures, and thought I'd ask for an opinion on them ^^

Matthew from Fire Emblem


Colm, also from Fire Emblem


Hamtaro!!!

[ShadowLera]

Like I said before, this is amazingly good for your first try. I was drawing lopsided stick figures when I started out, but you already have your own style. I think if you keep practicing you'll be as good as most of the other artists here in like a year.

[Yakule]

I'm not going to sugar coat anything, and I hope you can take the constructive crit well enough.

On the first one, the ears are a bit pronounced, might want to fix that, was well as with the legs being a bit too short for the body.

On the second one the neck is giraffe-esque, being extremely long. You might also want to have the neck a bit straighter, instead of leaning to one side.

As for hamtaro, you might want to work on rounding both sides of the head properly, as that makes it look like he has a tumor on the side of the head.

Other then that, the style is good, just some minor details you need to work on.

[Ritsuka]

Yeah~ The more criticism, the better. nd I noticed the thing with Colm's neck... I kinda messed up and had to draw all new clothes for him because I messed up the collar part. And thanks for the other suggestions ^^' I didn't notice Hamtaro's lopsided head.

[ShadowLera]

I don't think there's a wrong way to draw Hamtaro, but I agree with Yak on most of what she said. Still, effort is really all that matters to me, and the first picture looks like it had the most put into it, so that's my favorite of yours.

[Leana]

They look great for a first try!  Keep drawing and you will become better. ^^

[zeik8]

I'm not going to sugar coat anything, and I hope you can take the constructive crit well enough.

On the first one, the ears are a bit pronounced, might want to fix that, was well as with the legs being a bit too short for the body.

On the second one the neck is giraffe-esque, being extremely long. You might also want to have the neck a bit straighter, instead of leaning to one side.

As for hamtaro, you might want to work on rounding both sides of the head properly, as that makes it look like he has a tumor on the side of the head.

Other then that, the style is good, just some minor details you need to work on.

Yak basically covered it, and she's right.
So if it really was your 1st try, no worries, just keep at it.